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How to deal with difficulties in our life

怎样克服生活中的困难

云大附中初三 马靖宇

Difficulties are like springs. If you are weak, they will be strong. If you are strong, they will be weak.Our life is full of difficulties. I will share some suggestions with you.   


First,you should never give up whenever you meet difficulties. It is necessary for you to face difficulties bravely with a smile. Second, you’d better calm down. And then you can find the best way to solve problems.Third, as the saying goes, “Failure is the mother of success”. Never be afraid of difficulties and learn from mistakes, you will find it easier to work them out.


Nothing is difficult, if you put your heart into it. Wish all the difficulties will be overcome.


译文

困难就像弹簧,你强它们就弱,你弱,它们就强。生活中充满了困难,我将和你分享一些处理困难的建议。


第一,无论什么时候你遇到困难,你都不应该放弃。勇敢面对困难、笑对困难是很有必要的。

第二,你最好冷静。你就会找到解决问题的最佳方式。

第三,就像谚语说的一样,“失败是成功之母”。不要害怕困难并从错误中学习,你会发现很容易克服困难。

世上无难事,只怕有心人。希望你能克服所有的困难。


       

My dream job  

           我梦想的工作

昆二中初三 刘千睿

In my heart, I have a beautiful dream. When I was young, I hoped to be a singer. I have never given up my dream, which has become a part of my life.


Singing is a valuable treasure for me. I enjoy singing very much. While singing, my heart as well as my body is joyful. When I’m happy, I often sing out to share my happiness with others. I also sing out to pour out my bad feelings when I’m upset. To achieve my singing dream, three things are necessary. First, I should study hard and become an intelligent person. Second, I will learn some musical theories. Third, I must practice singing in my spare time. As the saying goes, “Practice makes perfect”.


Nothing is impossible. No matter how difficult the road to success is, I will hold on to my dream till one day it comes true.


译文

在我的内心深处,有一个美丽的梦想,当我还小的时候,我想成为一个歌手。我从未放弃过我的梦想,梦想已经变成我生活的一部分。我很喜欢唱歌,唱歌是一笔珍贵的财富。当我唱歌的时候,我的身心都是快乐的。


当我快乐的时候,我唱歌来分享我的幸福。当我悲伤的时候,我通过歌唱出释放我的悲伤。为了实现我的梦想,我必须做到三件事。第一,我要更加努力学习。第二,我将学习一些音乐理论知识。第三,我将在业余时间练习唱歌,就像谚语所说的一样,“熟能生巧”.


一切皆有可能,无论通往成功的路多么艰辛,我将坚持我的梦想,直到有一天它实现了。


How to keep healthy

怎样保持健康

师大实验中学初二 冯钰涵

As is known to all, health is always the topic that people focus on. And it is also of importance to us.


Here are some ways to keep healthy. First, we should go to bed early and get up early. Enough sleep helps us study better. Staying up late is bad for ou health. Second, we’d better keep a balanced diet. Eat more vegetables and fresh fruit, but less junk food. Third, it is necessary for us to take exercise. For example, we can run in the morning and go for a walk in the evening. Finally, listening to music or chatting with friends can make us relaxed and happy.


I believe if we can follow these suggestions, we can live a healthier and happier life.

译文

众所周知,健康是人们一直关注的话题。健康对我们非常重要。

以下是一些保持健康的方式。第一,早睡早起。足够的睡眠可以帮助我们学习更好。熬夜对健康有害。第二,我们最好保持均衡的饮食。多吃蔬菜和水果,少吃垃圾食品。第三,每天运动是很有必要的。例如,我们可以早晨跑步,傍晚散步。最后,听音乐、与朋友交流可以让我们放松和快乐。

我相信如果我们能遵循这些建议,我们将过着更健康、更快乐的生活。

My school life 

我的校园生活

师大实验中学初三 厉航宇

Looking back the past three years, I remember many things.The happiest memories will be kept in mind, which warms my forever.


When I first got into middle school, I was worried and nervous. Everything was strange and new. When I played a game in Chinese class. I always felt very pleased, whether I won or not. And in math class, I got a satisfaction of feeling when I solved variable math problems. After I made an effort to get full marks, the teacher praised me and encouraged me to be a better person. What a beautiful life! 


Now, I am going to graduate and leave our colorful school in several weeks. The school life helps me grow up healthily, from which I learn what love is, what friendship is and what happiness is.


译文

回忆过去的三年,我仍然记得很多事情。最快乐的记忆一直在我的心里,永远温暖着我。

当我第一天走进学校的时候,我很紧张和担心。一切都是陌生的、新奇的。当我在语文课上玩游戏,无论我是否获胜,我都是愉快的。在数学课上,当我解决了多变的数学问题,我获得了满足感。我通过努力获得好成绩后,老师表扬了我,并鼓励我成为一个更优秀的人。多么美好的生活!

现在,我将在几周后毕业,离开我多姿多彩的校园。校园生活让我健康成长,让我懂得了什么是爱,什么是友谊,什么是幸福。


An unforgettable person 

 一个难忘的人

师大实验中学初三 冯茜婷

As we know, teachers play an important role in our lives. I will never forget her, my math teacher. 


My math teacher is a forty-year-old woman with long curly hair. She is so warm-hearted and good-tempered that everyone loves her. She is hard-working. She is always the first to arrive and the last to leave her office. When I see our pictures, I always remember whenever I meet with the problems, she always gets ready to help me. She encourages me to get full marks and overcome difficulties, which has made a big difference to me. With her help, I have made great progress in my study.


As the saying goes,“Teachers are engineers of human soul” . I am really grateful to her. Thank you , my math teacher.


译文

众所周知,教师在我们生活中占有重要作用。我永远无法忘记我的数学老师。


我的数学老师,四十岁,留着长长的卷发。她热心,脾气好,每个人都很喜欢她。她工作努力。她总是第一个到办公室,最后一个离开。当我看到我们的照片,我总会想起每当我遇到困难的时候,她总是帮助我。她鼓励我克服困难,获得满分,这些对我产生了很大的影响。在她的帮助下,我获得了巨大的进步。


就像名言所说,“教师是人类灵魂的工程师”。我很感激我的数学老师。谢谢你,我的数学老师。


How to protect the environment  

  怎样保护环境

云大附中初三 陈星竹

The population is increasing, and the environment is becoming worse and worse. We have only one earth. It is our duty to protect out environment.


Now, let me introduce some ways to protect the environment. First of all, we are not supposed to throw litter or spit in public. Second, we should remember to turn off the lights when we leave the classroom in order to save energy. Third, we should take care of the forest and plant more tress instead of cutting them down. Finally, it would be better if we walk or ride a bike to school. It is not only good for the environment but also our health. 


Only by changing the way we treat the environment can we get along well with it. Only by saving the environment can we save ourselves. Let’s take action to make the environment more beautiful.

译文


人口在增长,环境也越来越糟糕。我们只有一个地球。保护环境是我们的责任。


现在,让我来介绍一些保护环境的方式。首先,我们不应该在公共场合扔垃圾、随地吐痰。第二,为了节约能源,在我们离开教室的时候,要记得关灯。第三,我们要保护森林,种更多的树,而不是砍伐树木。最后,如果我们步行或者骑车去上学,这有益于我们的健康和环境。


只有改变我们对待环境的方式,我们才能与环境友好共处。只有通过拯救环境,才能拯救我们自己。让我们行动起来创造更美丽的环境。


The place I want to visit    

我想去的地方

云大附中初三 黄俞霖

Hong Kong is such a special place that I dream of visiting. Hong Kong lies in the southeast of China. It is called “The Pearl of the East” and “Shopping Paradise”.


Hong Kong’sculture is influenced by the western culture and Chinese traditional  culture, which attracts lots of visitors.The Hong Kong Disneyland is a good place to have fun.There are many characters in Disneyland.They can lead you into a wonderful journey. Ocean park is also a fascinating place for people who loves ocean.Watching dolphin shows is enjoyable. What’s more, Hong Kong snack is delicious, such as egg tart. 


In short, Hong Kong is worth visiting.If I visit Hong Kong, I will enjoy myself.


译文

香港是一个如此特别的城市,我很想去踏上这段梦之旅。香港位于中国东南部,香港享有“东方之珠”,“购物天堂”的美誉。


香港的文化受到西方文化和中国传统文化的影响,这吸引了很多游客到香港。香港迪士尼乐园是一个娱乐的绝佳地方。在香港迪士尼乐园,迪士尼人物会带领你进入一段神奇之旅。对于热爱海洋的人来说,海洋公园是一个令人神往的地方。观看海豚表演是令人愉快的。再者,香港小吃非常美味,比如蛋挞。


总之,香港很值得一游。如果我去香港,我一定会很开心。



The Changes of Mine      

我的改变

云大附中初三 李东俊

People sure changed. I have greatly changed in the past two years. I have got more knowledge and made more progress.


I used to be short and heavy, but I am taller and thinner now. I think I become handsome! In the past, I was like a person who got lost. But now, I can find the star which is guiding me in darkness. I can face difficulties bravely. I didn’t use to enjoy reading books at all. Now I love reading. I think the more I read, the more I will know. I didn’t use to have a goal. Now I want to be a scientist and I study harder than before to make my dream come true. 


All in all, I am pleased with these changes because they have brought me the happiness of growth.


译文

人一定是会改变的。在过去的两年,我改变了很多。我学到了更多的知识,取得了更大的进步。


我曾经又胖又矮,但是现在我又高又瘦。我觉得我变帅了。在过去,我就像迷路的人。但是现在我找到了黑暗中指引我的星星。我能勇敢的面对困难。我曾经不喜欢看书,现在我很喜欢阅读。我认为我读的越多,我懂得的越多。我曾经没有目标,现在我想成为一名科学家。为了实现我的梦想,我比以前更努力学习。


总的来说,我很高兴我有这些改变,因为改变给我带来了成长的快乐。


My Favourite Singer      

我最喜欢的歌手

师大实验中学初三 王佩嘉

Music is the most powerful thing in the world. Some people say it can heal broken hearts and change a person’s life. As for me, a special country musician has changed my view on music.


I grew up in an environment with Chinese music. I hardly have a chance to know music in other countries. One day, my friend introduced a song named Love Story to me, which is sweet, magical, angel-like.What a touching story the singer told!The sentence “Because we were both young when I first saw you.” impressed me a lot. Later, I learned that Love Story is country music. And the singer named Taylor Swift is one of the most famous country musicians, who has gradually become my favourite singer.


I am lucky and glad to get to know Taylor Swift. This brilliant singer has affected me and opened my eyes to the music world.


译文

音乐是世界上最有力量的事物。有人说音乐能治愈破碎的心,音乐能改变一个人的人生。对我而言,一个乡村音乐歌手改变了我对音乐的看法。我生活在中国音乐的环境里,我很少有机会了解其他国家的音乐。有一天,我的朋友给我介绍了“爱的故事”这首歌。甜美的,充满魔力的,天使般的声音让我着迷。这首歌讲述的故事多么感人啊!特别是那句歌词“当我第一次见到你的时候,我们都很年轻。”让我感触很深。后来,我了解到“爱的故事”是由最有名的乡村音乐歌手之一泰勒·斯威夫特演唱。她逐渐变成我最喜欢的歌手。


我很快乐也很幸运逐渐了解泰勒·斯威夫特。智慧的泰 勒·斯威夫特影响了我,并开阔了我对音乐的眼界。


           

My hometown  

我的家乡

云大附中初三  杨凯然

As the saying goes, “East or west, home is best”. Of all the cities in China, I like my hometown Kunming best.


Kunming is the capital and the biggest city in Yunnan. It is well-known as the “Spring City”. It is neither too hot in summer nor too cold in winter. Because of the pleasant climate, beautiful flowers can be seen all year round. If you want to enjoy a sunny afternoon in Kunming, Green Lake Park will be a great choice. Dianchi Dam, a wonderful place which is full of warmth and romance.You can also fly a kite, ride a bike there. Another fascinating place is Daguanlou. It is famous for a couplet written by Sun Binweng. Remember to try local dishes like Crossing Bridge Noodles and Modeng Baba.


I feel lucky to live in such an amazing city. Just make a plan to travel in Kunming,and you will have fun.



译文

正如谚语所说,“金窝银窝,不如自己的狗窝。”在中国的所有城市里,我最爱我的家乡--昆明。


昆明是云南的省城,也是云南最大的城市。昆明以“春城”享誉于世。夏天不会太热,冬天也不会太冷。由于怡人的气候,在昆明四季都可以看到美丽的花。如果你想享受阳光明媚的下午,去翠湖是一个很棒的选择。滇池大坝,一个温情,浪漫的地方,感觉超好。你可以在大坝上骑单车,放风筝。另一个迷人的地方是大观楼,因为孙鬓翁的一幅长联而闻名至今。记得品尝地方美食,比如过桥米线和摩登粑粑。


我很幸运生活在这样神奇的城市。只要制定一个计划去昆明旅行,你就会玩得很开心。

My best friend

我最好的朋友

师大实验中学初二 陈彦洁

Lily is one of the most important persons in my life. She is not only my classmate but also my best friend. 


She is a warm-hearted and she is always ready to help others. Whenever I am in trouble, she gives me a hand. I understand the saying“A friend in need is a friend indeed”. We have something in common. Both of us are fond of swimming. We go swimming twice a month.We are interested in reading books.We agree that reading is like talking with a wise man. But in some ways, we are different. I am a quite girl. She is more outgoing than me. She always makes me laugh. I am a lot more hard-working than her. So I get better grades than her. She is the tallest student in our class. So she jumps higher and runs faster than me.


My favourite saying is “A true friend reaches for your hand and touches your heart”. I am lucky to have such a true friend.


译文

莉莉是我生命中最重要的人之一。她不仅是我的同学,还是我最好的朋友。


莉莉很热心,她总是乐意助人。无论什么时候我有困难,她都会帮助我。我懂得了那句谚语“患难见真情。”在某些方面,我们是相同的。我们都喜欢游泳,我们一个月游泳两次。我们都喜欢阅读。我们一致认为阅读就像和智者对话。但是在某些方面,我们有差异。我很安静,但是她比我开朗,她总是逗我笑。我比她学习更努力,所以我的成绩更好。她是班上最高的学生,所以她跳得比我高,跑得比我快。


我最喜欢的谚语是“真正的朋友伸出援手,触动你的心灵。”我很幸运拥有一个真正的朋友。


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